You're doing good so far, just made a few minor corrections (torn asunder, not thorn asunder, etc). One thing I'm not sure how to fix tho, as I don't know this plotline -- near the end of your Kentsu article, you mention one of the soldiers given the choice to run or fight, and that he was one of the few who 'chose correctly.' This is both a biased statement, and does not directly say what the correct decision was, which can lead to confusion. Please fix. VestDan 11:25, 10 January 2006 (CST)
What the hell is a Ret-Con? I don't necessarily have problems with using terminology like this, but please at least make sure to make an article defining them when you do.
Also... not to be mean, but could you try to touch up the spelling and grammar a bit? I've had to fix a number of things. Still, thanks for the help.
Oh! one more thing -- I'm not doing this so much for prerev stuff because it's hard to know sources, but could you start mentioning in these articles the books in which the characters/places appear? Just something near the end, like "Xantcha appeared in the book Planeswalker. The link won't go anywhere for a while, but the groundwork will be there when we do articles for the various publications.VestDan 13:50, 13 January 2006 (CST)
Sliver Overlord
Please do not use copyrighted material without permission, we have to delete such entires (if you do have permission please say so on the talk page). The third paragraph was copied word by word from Rei's article. --Oracle of Truth 08:24, 7 May 2006 (CDT)
Where vs. were
I've noticed than in a lot of articles you use "where" when you should be using "were". "Were" is a past tense verb; "where" indicates location. --Binary 13:07, 31 May 2006 (CDT)
Look at his name, read his "bio"... just correct mistakes. (I'm sure though that he makes less mistakes than I ;) ). MORT 16:15, 31 May 2006 (CDT)